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Chapter 8

Stressful Times
                   "Give it all you've got team!!" Shouted Sonic encouraging his fellow team mates. "Tails go in a little more towards the Mother Ship! Sonic, Danny, and I will try to bring it down from the inside since our missles and gun fires aren't working!" Shouted Sonar pointing at a perfect spot to jump and land on. "Ok! Hang on!" Shouted Tails as he moved in.
                   "AH!! SHOOT THEM DOWN!!!! QUICKLY!!!" Shouted Dr. Eggman as he paniced a bit. "Yes sir!" Said his two henchmen robots. They fired their arsenal at them but each one missed Tails's plane. "Haha!! You missed us Egghead!!!" Teased Sonic with a grin. Sonic, Sonar, and Danny jumped off the plane once they were close enough and landed on the Mother Ship. As soon as they landed Tails's wing got hit by a missel and had to make and emergacy landing but Tails was just fine thanks to his piloting skills. "Tails is fine. Let's move on!" Said Sonic cheaking up on Tails. "I think it'll be a lot better if we split up. It'll give us more cover time and find the main engine room and bring this ship down." Said Sonar thinking. "Ok, I think that's fine." Said Danny agreeing with Sonar.
                   Sonic just rolled his eyes. "Ok, Sonic you go that way to the right, Danny you go that way to the left, and I'll go straight. Meet y'all back here when were done." Said Sonar explaing the plan. "Ok." They said as they went to their direction. So Sonar ran straight down into the inside of the ship and through several door ways untill suddenly she opened the last door and a spring came up and puched her back several feet away and landed on her back. She groaned with pain as she sat up rubbing her head. Suddenly, a mechanical hand reached down and grabed her. She struggled to get free. "Ho ho ho ho ho!!! Look what I've draged in?! Sonar the Hedgehog!! And what's this? All alone with out her boy friend Sonic?!!" Laughed Dr. Eggman evilly. "He's NOT my BOY FRIEND!! *grunts*" Shouted Sonar trying to get her self free.
                   But Eggman wasn't listening. Suddenly, she was getting her information taken out of her by the robot. Eggman got some information he never knew about Sonar. "I see that if I drop you from way up here you could die. Only Sonic can survive a fall like this but I see in your record you can't survive this fall. So.... one way to get rid of you is just to drop you! How easy and so simple!" Said Dr. Eggman as he began to walk toward the edge of his ship. "*Grunts* Let me go you Egghead!!!" Shouted Sonar trying to get free again. Eggman didn't listen and held her over to where she could see the ground 5,000 feet below her. "YOU BETTER NOT DROP ME EGGMAN!!!! OR I SWEAR DANNY WILL COME AND KICK YOUR NASTY BIG ROUND BUTT!!!!" Sonar shouted.
                    "Danny?! Who's Danny?!" Asked Dr. Eggman confused. "Danny is my boyfriend and if you kill me he's going to be very upset and he's going to kick your butt so hard you won't even dare come back for more!!!" Shouted Sonar. "Ho ho ho ho ho oh!!! Like that'll ever happen!!! Say your prayers Sonar! Cause this is your last day alive!!!" Shouted Dr. Eggman as he laughed evilly. "Let her go Eggman!" Said a  voice behind Dr. Eggman's robot. They both look back and Sonar was surpriced to see who came to her rescue. "SONIC?!!!" They both shouted. "Sonic!! What are you doing here?! Get out of here I can handle this my self!! I don't need your help!!!" Shouted Sonar a little upset at the saight that she's now the damsile in distress.
                     "Sonar don't be a fool!! You need my help!!" Shouted Sonic as he took one step forward. "Don't come any closer Sonic or I'll let her go and she'll go SPLAT on the ground below!!!!" Shouted Dr. Eggman as he held her out more. "AHHHHH!!!!" Yelled Sonar in fright. "SONIC GET OUT OF HERE!!! YOUR ONLY GOING TO MAKE THIS EVEN MORE WORSE!!!!" She shouted. "Sorry Sonar but I can't leave you hanging!! You need my help!!" Sonic took one more step. "Ah ah ah ah!!" Dr. Eggman said as he put her out more. "PLEASE SONIC GET OUT OF HERE!!!! CAN'T YOU SEE I DON'T NEED YOUR HELP!!!!! JUST TURN AROUND AND LEAVE!!!!" Shouted Sonar her voice shaking with fear as tears began to form. Suddenly, when Sonic took another step Eggman let his grip go and let Sonar fall to her doom!!                                                                                                          "SONAR NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!" Yelled Sonic as he ran to the edge of the ship and looked down. "Ho ho ho ho ho ho!!!!!! One down the rest of you to go!!" Laughed Dr. Eggman very evilly. Then with out thinking Sonic jumped after her before it was too late to save her. Eggman was surpriced. Danny arrived there too late and at a wrong time. "Where's Sonar and Sonic?!" He asked in his fighting position. "Ho ho ho ho!! So, your Danny Sonar was talking about to me earlyer, eh? But your so scronny and weak!! What can you possiably do to a man like me with this maga robot?? Beside that, your little friend Sonar took a dive to the ground below along with Sonic behind her! Ho ho ho ho ho ho ho!!!!" Laughed Dr. Eggman evilly. "*gasp* Nooo!!" Said Danny as he put his fists down in shock. "You are now my prisioner Danny." Said Dr. Eggman as he lauched net at him capturing Danny in it. "*Grunts* LET ME GO!!!! Grrrrrrah!!!!" Shouted Danny as he tried to get out of the tangled up net on him.
                       Sonar yelled as she plummited to the ground below, Sonic was all most there to reach her. Sonic made him self go faster to reach her until he was finally above her. Sonar was surpriced to see him. He grabed her by the arms and held her close to him. Suddenly, Sonar felt safe and had a warm feeling being this close to him again. They made eye to eye contact but it didn't last long. Sonic moved her above him so that he ws benieght her, that way when they hit the ground Sonic would resive the impact and not Sonar. He put one arm around her and the other ontop of her head. Sonic then saw the ground below him and embraced for the impact. "HANG ON SONAR!!!!!!" Shouted Sonic as he closed his eyes shut and waited for impact.
                       Sonic hit the ground hard but Sonar was ok with no impact. Everyone that has landed to help Tails in his plane ran towards Sonic and Sonar to see if they are ok. Sonar was shaking in fear that she couldn't move. "SONAR! SONIC!! Are you two ok?!" Shouted Starry as she shook Sonar. Sonar opened her eyes quickly and got off of Sonic. She looked at him. "Sonic?" Sonar shook him. "Sonic? Please wake up. Please!" Tears fomed in her eyes at the saight of Sonic not responding to her. "Sonic please wake up!! Open your eyes for me please you must wake up!!!" Shouted Sonar now over him and his face. A tear rolled down her cheek and onto his face. Everyone got closer to get a look at the sene. "Sonar..." Said Starry as she kneeled down next to her and placed her hand on her shoulder. "... He risked is life to save me Starry!! And I didn't even ask for it!! I told him he didn't have to but he didn't listen to me!! Why didn't he listen to me??!!" Shouted Sonar with tears streaming down her cheeks.
                       "Because he still cares for you Sonar. Deep down he still loves you. That's why he risked his own life to save yours. You would've done the same thing if it was the other way around now wouldn't you Sonar?" Asked Starry. "*sniff* yeah..." Said Sonar looking at Sonic. Suddenly, Sonic woke up coughing and looked at everyone looking at him. "*Grunts* What happened?" Sonic asked as he rubbed his head. Suddenly, all feelings changed in side of Sonar. All the sadness she felt went away and got replaced by anger again. "WHY DID YOU DO THAT?!! WHY DIDN'T YOU LISTEN TO ME SONIC THE HEDGEHOG?!!!! WHY???!!!" Shouted Sonar going over him again face to face. Sonic pushed her back a little and sat up. "Because I still care for you Sonar. Even if we broke up, I still wouldn't let any harm come to you. You mean so much to me still that I can't let any thing bad happen to you. If anything bad happens to you I would never forgive my self for not being there for you." Said Sonic looking straight into Sonar's green watery eyes. Sonic got close to her and was about to kiss her but Sonar turned the other way. "Sorry Sonic. But we're through... we need to get back to work..." Sonar looked around and noticed Danny's face wasn't present there. "... where's Danny?" She asked.
                       Sonic let out a dissapointed sigh as he moved away from Sonar and got up. He was about to give her a hand up, but Sonar refused. "No thank you, I can do it my self." Said Sonar as she got up by her self and dusted off. Suddenly, a big dome came up from the ground around them and traped them inside. Then, and evil laugh came through the air waves. Everyone got in their fighting positions. "Oh great! I knew I smelled a roten egg around here!" Shouted Sonic in his fighting position. "There is no escape Freedom Fighters!!! Or should I say Freedom "LOSERS"!! Ho ho ho ho ho!!!!" Laughed Dr. Eggman evilly. "Quit your laughing Eggbutt and let us go!!" Shouted Sonar fustraded. "Tisk tisk! Oh how the mighty have fallen! Redused to name calling Sonar?! What a shame." Said Dr. Eggman through the intercom.
                       Sonar grawled in anger. "I just wanted to let you all know that I have Danny up here with me traped, and helplessness is sinking in to him by the second! So if you want to save him, Sonar, all you have to say is that you give up this fight and I'll let him free. So what do you say?" Said Dr. Eggman with an evil grin on his face.
Sonar looked around at the team. They were all shaking their heads for no.
                       She looks back up at Dr. Eggman. "Sorry pops!!! But I'm not going to give up this fight!!! We will keep on fighting you until your defeated!!!" Shouted Sonar with seriousness in her voice. "Very well then you've made your choice?" Asked Dr. Eggman. "I have. For me and the team." Answered Sonar. "Then you all shall die!!!" Shouted Dr.Eggman as he pushed a button Setting off a huge explotion inside the dome.
                          
              OMG!!!!!!!!!! What will happen next?! Did the Freedom Fighters die?! Or did
                      they survive?! Read and Find out in the next chapter!!!!
                                     (End Of Chapter 8)
                             
Here is Chapter 8! I hope y'all like it!! :D Not finished yet get back on it later.... sorry.

*All characters mentioned here has been given credit! Thank you!*

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BlazeandHoneythecats Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice story Sonar can't wait till chapter 9 comes!!!
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Sonar15 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Student General Artist
THanks! ^^ :D
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PuffyCookieBoo Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is epicly interesting!!! >.< i can't wait for chapter 9!!!
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Sonar15 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Student General Artist
I know right?! I can't wait to type it down! You won't believe what happens next!!
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PuffyCookieBoo Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i can't wait!! :D this is better than any other books i read! lmfao XD
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Sonar15 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Student General Artist
^^ :D thanks that means alot to me! ^^ I just might be a Sonic story writer!! I'll get licened from Sega and open my own buisness of Sonic stories!! That will be cool don't ya think? ut I don't know if that will ever come true...
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MarioGamer07 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
:iconimhighplz:
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Sonar15 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011  Student General Artist
:D
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MarioGamer07 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
HAPPY BIRTDAY!!:party:.................nah just kidding:lol:
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Sonar15 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Student General Artist
LOL my birthday ain't until 3 more months! ^^
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