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Chapter 6

A New Start
                    ~Danny's House~
              Sonar rang the door bell and Danny answered it. "Sonar. What are you doing here?" Asked Danny confused to see Sonar standing out side his front door. "Danny, I'm sorry for the way I treated you this afternoon. I shouldn't have left you like that. It's just that I was so confused and my head wasn't in the right place." Sonar explained. "Sonar, its all right. I forgive you. I should've been more careful of my actions. I was moving too fast for you and after your break up with Sonic, I guess it was too fast to move in to a new relationship with someone else." Said Danny.
              "Thanks Danny. But now that I know what to do, how about you and I go to an amusment park?" Said Sonar as she put her hand on Danny's arm. Danny felt a warm sansation come from her hand and he took comfort in that. He looked at Sonar and smiled at her. "Sure. The amusment park sounds good." Said Danny as he walked out of his house, closed the door behind him, held Sonar's hand and they were both on their way to the Amusment park.
                     ~At the Amusment Park~
               "*Laughing with joy* Oh Danny! That was so much fun! We should go on that ride again!!" Said Sonar as she ate her Chillidog that Danny bought for her after they got off the ride. "Boy Sonar, you sure do love that rollor coster." Said Danny with a smile. "I do! It's my favorite one!" Said Sonar with a big grin on her face. "Even if its for little kids?" Asked Danny with an awkward smile this time. "There's nothing wrong with liking kiddy rides!" Said Sonar crossing her arms. "I didn't say that! But why not let me choose a ride this time." Said Danny holding Sonar's hand again. "Oh all right." Said Sonar giving in. "Hmmmmm, how about that ride?" Asked Danny as he pointed at a water log ride. Sonar gulped in fear. "T-that looks... w-w-wet!!" Said Sonar through her shivers.
               "Awww come on Sonar! It'll be fun! Or are you too chicken to go on that ride with me?" Said Danny with a small tease. "I-I'm n-n-not afraid!!! Come on! Lets go!" Said Sonar as she threw away her finished Chillidog plate in the trash, grabed Danny's hand and they got in line for the water log ride. Soon the moment came by and they go on. Sonar was pale as a ghost. She was holding on to Danny's back the whole ride, but when the drop came... She Screamed her lungs out. When the ride came to a stop, she and other passangers were all wet... but some let's say were covered in throw up... "Sonar, you REALLY shouldn't have eaten that Chillidog before we went on this ride..." Said Danny with a tear as he cleaned his coat with a napkin. "S-s-sorry... D-d-danny." Said Sonar shaking still from the ride. Danny cleaned her up and wraped his jacket around her. "It's ok Sonar. Let's go home." Said Danny as he picked her up in his arms.
                "But I don't want to go home yet. Can we go to the park, somewhere where it's nice and peaceful?" Asked Sonar looking up at Danny. "Oh... I guess it's ok." Said Danny as he made a detour to the park.
                           ~At the Park~
                The moon was out and shinning bright over the park. Lovers were out and about stolling the park where no one can see them make out. Danny came to a stop and put Sonar down. She was feeling better now. "*breathing in and leting it out* Smell that fresh air! That's what I love about the park at night. How about you Sonar?" Asked Danny as he looked over at Sonar. She was looking down at the dirt beneight her. "Sonar?" Asked Danny as he put a hand on her shoulder. "Huh? Oh! Yeah, uh... what were you talking about again?" Said Sonar as she snapped out of thinking about Sonic. "Uh, what were you thinking about?" Asked Danny. "Oh nothing.... really." Said Sonar as she looke the other way. "Was about Sonic?" Danny asked. There was a long pause between Sonar and Danny, she looked at him again. "Yes, I was thinking about Sonic." Said Sonar as she admite it.
                 "I knew it. You don't have to hide those things from me Sonar. You can trust me. I know I wasn't trust worthy back then, but now. You changed me you made me bring in the good and get away from the bad. You can trust me now so please give me a chance." Said Danny as he faced Sonar face to face. Moonlight shined in her eyes making them sparkle. "I know I can trust you now Danny... but you got to remember I'm still pained by the mark of Sonic's face in my soul. Everything that I do now reminds me of him! We use to go out like this at the park. We used to go to the amusment park together aswell. And I miss him!" Said Sonar as she began to tear up by the memories Sonic and her shared.
                 Danny held her closer to him and gave her a hug. "I know the pain you go through Sonar. But you must stay strong, you will get through all of this and I'll help you." Said Danny as he pulle her away a little to see her face. She looked up at him with tears streeming down her cheeks. He wiped them away. "Don't cry no more Sonar. A beautiful face doesn't decirve to get wet by tears of sadness but joy." Said Danny with a small smile. Sonar made a small smile back. Then Danny leaned over and finally gave her a kiss on her lips.
                 Sonic was stolling through the park, alone, and came apone seeing two couples kissing in the moonlight. To Sonic's surprice he saw it was Sonar and Danny Kissing! Sonic gasped as he ran behind the tree to get a better view. "(I was right! It is Sonar and Danny kissing!)" Said Sonic in a low whisper to himself as he continued to watched them kiss. Sonic's heart sank with each second that ticked by as he watched them. "(I guess Sonar moved on and has no feeling left for me. As I still do for her. I came to the park to think about her and what do I get? Seeing her with another man kissing their troubles away. I better go home, I think I feel sick.)" Said Sonic to himself in a whisper as he left from behind the tree. He ran to his house and didn't look back.
                  As Danny stoped kissing Sonar, she felt very strange. "(Sonic saw me... I know it.)" She said in her head. "So how was the kiss?" Asked Danny with a smile. "Hmmm, ok. But I think you should take me home now. It's geting late. And I need to get my sister from Cream's house." Said Sonar with a smile. "Ok I'll go with you." Said Danny thoughtfully. "Oh no no no no! Don't trouble your self, you go on home and get some rest. I can mannage this on my own. Besides, you've done alot for me today, and I thank you." Said Sonar sounding pleading. "Well, Ok I guess. See ya tomarrow." Said Danny with a smile. "Thanks Danny, yeah come by my house tomarrow if ya want." Said Sonar as she ran at supersonic speed to Cream's house before Danny could say another word.
                    ~Cream's House~
                  "She's been wounderful today Sonar. I had no trouble with her being here. Please come again and let your sister play with Cream again." Said Vanilla; Cream's mom. "Thank you Vanilla, I will tomarrow." Said Sonar as she carried her now sleeping sister in her arms. As Sonar ran home, she stoped at Sonic's House but didn't go near it. "(I'm sorry Sonic... I didn't mean for you to see that. I didn't know you were there watching. But, goodnight Sonic my luv. I still love you.)" Said Sonar in her head as she continued to run home. Sonic looked out his window. "I must be hearing things... I thought I heard someone outside. But Oh well..." He looks at the moon. "... Sonar, I know you've moved on but I just wish I could tell you that I'm still I love with you. But I guess it won't matter no more. Goodnight Sonar my luv... I'll miss you." Said Sonic out loud to him self as he turned away form the window and went up to his room and into bed.
                       ~Sonar's house in her bed room~
                   "*sigh* I miss you Sonic... soooo much." She said out loud as she closed her eyes and went to sleep.
             What will happen next? Find out on the next Chapter!!
                                 (End Of Chapter 6)
Here is Chapter 6! Hope y'all like!! ^^ :D

*All characters used here has been given credit. Thank you.*

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:iconmariogamer07:
MarioGamer07 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
hurgh i think i'm gonna be sick!:puke:.......too much...pizza:faint:
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Sonar15 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Student General Artist
O.o....
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:iconmariogamer07:
MarioGamer07 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
.............
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captainIronstar Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I almost forgot you had a sister
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:iconsonar15:
Sonar15 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Student General Artist
yah.
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:iconcaptainironstar:
captainIronstar Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
its because you don't do much art/stories with her in it
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:iconsonar15:
Sonar15 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Student General Artist
i know..
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:iconcaptainironstar:
captainIronstar Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
yeah
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Sonar15 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Student General Artist
^^
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spyaroundhere35 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
daaaaamn. major twist of events.
epic story so far.

look forward to the next part.

question: will there be more of dett?
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