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Chapter 5

The Close Call
                  As Danny leaned to kiss Sonar on the lips, Sonic poped in Sonar's mind and quickly looked away from Danny's face before he could kiss her. "I'm sorry Danny. But, I can't. I need time to think and get my head staight from what happend yesterday." Sonar said as she pulled away from Danny's arms. "Sonar, I'm sorry." Said Danny putting his ears down. "It's ok Danny... but I need my space. Good bye." Said Sonar as she opened the door and left. "How could I be so stupid!! I knew she's still has Sonic in her mind and I completly forgot when I looked at her face!! Now I know she won't think of me the same way! I've completly ruined it!!" Said Danny to him self out loud since he's the only one in his house now.
                  Sonar ran at supersonic speed to the market place where Starry and her other friends were waiting for her. "(I can't believe Danny was about to kiss me! But I can't fall in love with him if Sonic is still in my mind. I have to tell my best friend about this. I need some advice.)" Said Sonar in her head as she ran into the market place's doors. She found the table her friends were at and ran to them. "Hey, sorry I'm late! I was..." She saw Sonic sitting there infront of her. "... why is "HE" doing here?!" Asked Sonar crossing her arms as she got mad. Sonic stood up too. "I should be asking you the same thing!" He said as he too crossed his arms and got mad.
                  "Please, will you two just sit down and I'll explain everything!" Said Starry as she tried to calm them down. "You better have a good explaniation for all of this Starry. You know I can't stand Sonar here." Said Sonic sitting back down. "Well too bad Sonic! You'll have to stay here until I'm done!" Snapped Starry. Sonar sat down next to Sonic but looked away from him as soon as they made a quick eye contact.
                  "Ok, so the reason why Sonic is here is because we want to help y'all out. Kinda like a couples counciling." Said Starry as she sat back down too and began to explain. "But I don't need couples counciling! There is nothing going on inbetween US so this can't be couples counciling if we're not couples no more!" Said Sonic as he looked at Starry. "Yes y'all are! Deep down you two are madlly in love with one another but your anger and hate is bloking that love from shining through." Said Detonator as he looked over at Blaze; who was right next to him.
                   Sonar and Sonic looked at eachothers then quickly looked away. "No there's not! what ever I felt for him has gone away! I don't love him no more!" Said Sonar denining she is still in love with Sonic. "Me too! I don't love her no more!" Said Sonic as he also denied he is still in love with Sonar. "You just agreed with Sonar. Don't you remember how much you two agree with one another? That's how you two were so in love. Once you stoped agreeing with one anothers you stopped loving eachothers." Said Blaze. "Yeah, don't let all of this make you two to stop loving eachothers. To tell you two something, Blaze and I are couples. And we get into little arguments but we don't let that get in our way of loving one another." Said Detonator as he put an arm aroung Blaze and smiled at her, she smiled back.
                    Sonar and Sonic looked at one anothers and this time they didn't look away from one anothers. "*sigh* I need some time to think this through. I need space." Said Sonar as she looked away from Sonic and her friends. "Yeah, I don't want to move too fast right now." Said Sonic as he looked away form Sonar and his friends. "So you two are STILL going to stay separated???" Asked Starry in a little shock. "That's right. We need time away from one another. When the time is right, we'll see what happens." Said Sonar as she looked at Starry. So as time passed they ate their lunch and left their own way. Except for Detonator and Blaze they left together. "I was sure that telling them we were a couple and that advice was going to bring them back together. But I guess I was wrong." Said Detonator felling like a failure. "Hey, you tried your best and that's all that matters. You were great! But we need to let nature take it's course. Just like Sonar said, When the time is right, it'll happen." Said Blaze as she smiled at Detonator and gave him a kiss on his cheek. Detonator Blushed. "Thanks Blaze." Said Detonator with a smile. "Now lets go to the beach. We need to relax for a bit." Said Blaze with an idea. "Okay, lets go." Said Detonator as he held Blaze's hand and they walked to the beach.
                     "Starry, can I talk to you?" Said Sonar as she caught up with Starry. "Why sure Sonar. What about?" Asked Starry as she stoped and turned around to face Sonar. "Well, let's go to my house and we can talk there." Said Sonar as she looked around. So they went to Sonar's house. "Ok, so what do you want to talk about Sonar?" Asked Starry as she sat down on Sonar's couch in the living room. "Well the reason why I came late to lunch was because I was at Danny's house." Said Sonar as she sat down next to Starry. "Danny's house? What were you doing there? Isn't that Unknown?" Asked Starry a little bit on the edge of her seat. "But remember he's good now." Said Sonar reasuring her. "Oh right, I remember now. Carry on." Said Starry as she sat back now in ease. "Well, when I was about to leave, he stopped me and we went into this awkward position. He leand over and tried to kiss me..." Said Sonar as she looked away from Starry for a bit. "... did he kiss you?!" Asked Starry as she sat up straight again. "Well, no. He didn't get a chance to kiss me. Sonic came up in my head and I couldn't kiss Danny so I looked away and turned him down. But I don't know what to do! I'm accually falling for him AND Sonic! Please tell me what to do Starry!" Said Sonar as she looked back at Starry. "So your heart is still in love with Sonic." Said Starry as she looked at Sonar. "Yes, but I can't confront him yet." Said Sonar admiting it.
                      "Well Sonar, looks like your in a love triangle. But you got to follow your heart. Think of it this way, who will be the one to rescue you in a flash if you happen to get in to trouble? Who will stand by your side when you're sad? Who will give up everything just to see that you stay alive? Who will be the one to lift you up when your down and alone? You think of this questions and your surley to pick the one you are ment to be." Said Starry with a smile. "Thanks Starry. It's now clear to me on what I must do." Said Sonar with a smile as she got up from the couch. Starry also stood up. "Any time Sonar." Said Starry as she gave Sonar a hug. "Thanks Starry, thank you for your help!" Said Sonar as she gave her a hug too. Sonar led Starry to her door and they both walked their own way.
                       Who did Sonar Choose? Did she choose Sonic or Danny? Don't miss the shocking drama that is yet to come!! Find out on the next chapter!!
                                                   (End Of Chapter 5)
Here is chapter 5!! Hope y'all like it!

*All characters used in this story as been given credit. Thank you.*

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Epic. :D
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nice very nice cant wait for next part
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